I think the biggest change (if not the only one) is this: "Snape glared at her before leaning down into her desk, ensuring he was eye to eye with Hermione. “Miss Granger, do not mistake me for an idiot. I am well aware of what is going on and I will not stand for it. I suggest you think long and hard before you continue your little games.” He leaned even further towards her, his voice a mere breath against her cheek. “I assure you, whatever game you seek to play with me, I will always come out on top.” With that, he stood up, straightened his sleeves, and turned towards his desk in a swirl of robes."
I added this because, the last time I posted this fic, people weren't sure if Snape was actually going to challenge Hermione. They couldn't find a specific place where he implied such a thing. So I added it. This is where he begins to get very annoyed and toys with the notion of getting even (a very Slytherin thing). This is Snape's first warning to Hermione. But not the last...
That seems to be the only thing worth commenting on. Hermione does a little thinking, about whether or not she could go up against Snape. This is the first indication that Hermione might be thinking of accepting Snape's challenge (another thing people weren't too clear on, last time). Other than that, everything should be straight forward.
Look for chapter four and its notes soon!
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